Jet Ski movie idea

This thread got me thinking: http://www.x-h2o.com/threads/81005-Favorite-Jetski-scene-in-a-movie/page2

There are movies with jet skis and there are documentaries/freestyle DVD's out there but no actual movies centered around jet skis (especially free style). So I've been working on my jet ski movie plot. I have zero film experience and zero Hollywood connections so there is zero chance of this happening, but I thought I would put it out there.

We start out with your basic guy. Not a jock, not a mathlete, just average. Except he has an obsession with stand-up jet skis. His one and only friend doesn't get it. He asks why he is so involved in stand-up skis that NO ONE rides?

Our hero explains that his dad, his REAL dad was a pro-jet skier back in the 80's before his death, accident, prison term, whatever.

Insert 80's montage of jet ski.

They live in some town in the midwest with a "River Fest" or "Lake Fest" and our hero is excited and will of course be there with his stand-up ski. Upon arrival he is blocked from riding because he has no credentials. He parks his ski on the beach and resolves to just watch.

There is a pro-freestyle show at the festival. Insert awesome freestyle video stuff.

Then during a water ski event or a wakeboard show...something...there is an accident and a really hot chick is trapped underwater and needs to be rescued. No one can get to her, but our hero happens to be next to his ski (probably an old 550 or something BTW). He races out and performs some CGI totally fake artificial and unnecessary stunt to save her...I'm thinking like a nose-stab + submarine to get to the bottom in time to rescue our trapped hottie.

He rescues the hottie who is forever grateful. The Pro-freestyle notices him and asks him to join the team. They all travel around together doing shows and things are great. But our hero gets better and better until he is the star of the show.

The previous head-freestlyer gets jealous and does something to ruin our hero - (maybe plants drugs IN his ski to make him look like a mule?, maybe frames him for something, I dunno).

The team drops him and leaves him miles from home. He is all alone for 10 minutes, until our hottie who turns out to have a heart of gold shows up, says she believes his story and drives him home.

Depending on time/length we could go into a huge heist/break-in type stuff where our hero goes all 007 to clear his name, or it could just be a simple twist like the pro-team discovers the drugs weren't real and says:

"We cleared your name kid, but it's too late to make it to the BIG EVENT (like World Finals or something). Sorry, good luck, have a nice life, etc."

Then all of a sudden we meet the crazy engineer type who was probably snooping around earlier in the movie and it turns out he was the builder/designer/engineer for our hero's dad before the accident/killed/prison/whatever. The crazy engineer still has the last ski he was working on for our hero's father. It's untested, unridden, but possesses technology that is unheard of (yet somehow still inside the rules).

Somehow the hero, engineer, and hottie all make it to World Finals and enter the competition. And of course win.

So...is it a hit? Changes/additions/tweaks welcome.

Aaron
 

djkorn1

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I love it! 80's Cheese factor intact!!! Perfect...

Kinda like Rad! The kid should be from the wrong side of the tracks with an attitude..
 
Yes, it's cheesy. And yes, it's just a twist on probably 100 80's movies. But it's within reason and doesn't have a bunch of illegal activity like Fast and Furious or Biker Boyz that would draw bad attention to our sport.

Aaron
 

McDog

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He needs to get injured by the bad guy and have the engineer guy (ex-BUN employee) heal him by rubbing his hands together and laying hands on him. He also needs to pull off some crazy impossible trick that he saw his dad do and no one else can do.
 
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He needs to get injured by the bad guy and have the engineer guy (ex-BUN employee) heal him by rubbing his hands together and laying hands on him. He also needs to pull off some crazy impossible trick that he saw his dad do and no one else can do.

Right, but the trick his dad could do was only being devleloped, not perfected, so that the hero gets a chance to realize his Dad's unfinished "ultimate" trick. This multiplies the cheese factor by 100
 
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He also needs to be from a poor family and maybe work at the local jetski rental place dealing with sitdowns all day while dreaming of stand ups.....
 

SUPERJET-113

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He also needs to be from a poor family and maybe work at the local jetski rental place dealing with sitdowns all day while dreaming of stand ups.....

:haha: Thats perfect!


Larry "The Ripper" Rippenkroeger was going to do this at one time. The script was written and it was gonna happen, but then the budget fell through or something.

He would of been great in it.. He is like the Chuck Norris of standup riders!
 
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Peter123

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I've got it:

In the future, the Earth is engulfed with water when the polar ice caps melts, leaving the lands and civilization beneath the sea. In "Really-Wet-World" drifters sail across the waters of the world on their man-made ships, trading for supplies and salvaging what is left of civilization, communities of survivors lives in towns called "Atolls". An evil mutant, "The Mariner", is sentenced to death when the community discovers he is trying to prevent the "Smokers" from finding a mythical island called "Dryland". When the Atoll is being resupplied by The Smokers led by their leader Deacon, a woman named Helen and her adopted daughter Enola bribes The Mariner to blow up all of the gas and oil supplies distributed by Deacon. That is when the hero, ATS_Aaron, uses all of his jetskiing skills along with those of his LSFR crew to track down the evil Mariner and recover the map to Dryland and punish them for destoying their tanker.
 

Shifty

- SuperJet Thursday -
Dale Doback: I work at a college as a janitor even though I feel like I'm smarter than most of the people who go there. Sometimes I see an equation written on a blackboard like half an equation and... I just figure it out.
Male Therapist: Is this Good Will Hunting?
Dale Doback: No.
Male Therapist: It sounds alot like the plot of good will hunting.
Dale Doback: Yeah. Anyway. My best friend is Ben Affleck...
 

Cannibal

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Of course the only thing the kid has to remember his father by is an old hull his dad was building in the 80s covered by a dramatically dusty blanket in a garage with poor lighting and peaks of sunshine that amplify the dust as he pulls the covers back to reveal something that would look like an unfinished BOB hull to us. Once he saves the girl, her rich dad gives him $10000 as gratitude and the kid uses the money to finish his father's dream while practicing on that crapped out 550 he has.

I think at the end of the film, he needs to find out his father wasn't dead after all, it was the other racer he collided with and because of a case of mistaken identity (both racers where disfigured) and amnesia, his father went on to live the life of the other guy. After seeing his that old hull he was building, it all comes back to him (cut to flashback scene). That older guy with burns on his face working for his nemesis is actually his father. And, as it turns out, his nemesis is his father's son (his brother).
 

DangerBoy

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He needs to get injured by the bad guy and have the engineer guy (ex-BUN employee) heal him by rubbing his hands together and laying hands on him. He also needs to pull off some crazy impossible trick that he saw his dad do and no one else can do.

lol
The Jet Ski Kid

Honda wax on, wax off

than the big internet flame war where the bully gets banned
 
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SuziQ

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I :love: this thread!!!! Very creative is why! We need more input please!!!

The only twist I would like to see, is for the hottie to win World Finals!! :brap:

1. because I think that would be epic!!!

2. The damsel in distress bit is so very played out for me. Don't get me wrong, we need males to rescue us so many times, and I think that is very sexy when they do for sure (I like men that do that ...:purr:...because it is nice to feel protected indeed)! I would just like to see a new twist is all, so I think that would be a great ending.
 

TB

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i might be able to make some sort of short around the whole idea and get it some screen time at a few film festivals we have here...1. i live in the midwest..2. plenty of amateur riders here and a few better ones..plenty of lakes, water, etc. etc. 3. lot's of movies being made here since michigan did the whole tax credit thing..(it's a b**** to get tho' ) 4. my little brother who lives with me has a degree in film production and makes things all the time. 5. we are members of the grcmc (grand rapids community media center) as well as the west michigan film and video alliance.

so where's the rough draft of the script?? let's make a short for the next grand rapids film festival or the sagutuck film festival.
 
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